Guardians of Disorder. Circle 1.5

15 Sep Guardians of Disorder. Circle 1.5

The majority voted for posting once every two weeks. We slowed down a bit, so the deadlines have moved, but half of the players have already drawn their moves, so I’m posting them now. We watch, discuss, comment, constructively criticize.

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They said about thermonuclear colors. Looks like they put on a cheap HDR effect, for sure. 🙂 The last two pictures are really flat.

But you should always look at the pictures second. The main thing is the text. And here the problems are obvious, and very, very significant(for me?!). There is no logic at all in the layout: in the first picture the distance between the image and the block of text is completely thin, there is not enough air, and in the seventh there is too much of it. With paragraphs full paragraph. So, in printed publications, paragraphs are marked like this:

But in https://casinocosmobet.uk electronic ones it’s different:

And there is such a clear logic in this that there is no place for creativity. In general, in printed publications they save pages in this way. You missed a line, but in a three-hundred-page book you can even miss ten pages. It was because of economy that old logos had one or two colors. The same strict Norwegian design was used not because it was beautiful, but because it was practical. The second option is, of course, more understandable and readable. And it is used quite successfully on the Internet. The costs for this are minimal. You did it… I don’t know what! Two methods are used simultaneously on one “page”. This is beyond measure. In others, paragraphs are not divided at all, so you confuse the reader. Correct this part, pictures will be attached somehow.

O_o strange, I personally didn’t have that impression..
Well, the author of these pages is also looking at the topic, so I think he will keep it in mind.

I didn’t draw here at all, my move hasn’t happened here yet. Three different people drew where exactly it hurts the eye, for that matter?

That’s what I appreciate you for, it’s your extensive and constructive criticism!
Unfortunately, there really are problems with the text, even with banal grammar and punctuation..

20th and 21st pages so-so. There are no proportions, the quality is pretty poor (it’s just crooked and unfinished (because the author overloaded the picture with strokes))…

This is a special street cat.

Okamon, isn’t it clear that these are just two different plans, only one is larger than the other?.